Sunday, April 18, 2021

Day #18: Living Traits

Today's prompt sprouts from J. Ruth Gendler's “The Book of Qualities.”

Gendler personifies traits such as this:

Anxiety is secretive. He does not trust anyone, not even his friends, Worry, Terror, Doubt and Panic … He likes to visit me late at night when I am alone and exhausted. I have never slept with him, but he kissed me on the forehead once, and I had a headache for two years …”

Here are lines from other traits she examines:

Despair has “stopped listening to music.”

Courage “looks you straight in the eye…knows first aid…is not afraid to weep…has made the journey from loneliness to solitude”

Beauty “will dance with anyone brave enough to ask her.”

Excitement wears orange socks.

Pain’s “voice is hoarse from crying and screaming…if you face him directly, he will give you a special ointment so your wounds don’t fester.”

Anger “sharpens kitchen knives at the local supermarket on the last Wednesday of the month.”

Blame “keeps a pharmacist’s scale at the corner of his desk.”

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Your challenge is to personify a trait. You may write in prose-poem form or arrange your ideas on the page like a more traditional poem, as I did.  Here is a list of traits to choose from!

I chose "Strong."

Strong

You’ll meet Strong’s
public face first:
muscles in the gym
don’t mess with her.

Then you’ll meet her
softer side:
endurance through pain
speaking up
she’ll stand alone.

Then listen deeper
to hear
Strong’s silent self:
answering
to be
or not to be
with
Be.


Thanks to Ethical ELA for many of the prompts I'm adapting for my students this month.


7 comments:

  1. Fear
    She slaps you in the face.
    Fear pops out of nowhere,
    where you least expect it.
    Fear ruins a beautiful day
    with a thought of a thunder storm.
    Don't pay attention to her.
    Fear only gets stronger if you believe her.

    But Fear also protects.
    Letting you know
    you are at risk.
    Fear holds you back
    when the consequences could hold you back longer.

    Get to know Fear
    before you trust her too much.

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    1. Oh, Nicole! This is AWESOME! I was all in on the first paragraph (face-slapping!) and then I loved the TURN when you acknowledge our need for Fear. Your final lines are gold.

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  2. Greed

    He's hiding everywhere
    Greed is inside each and every businessmen
    No matter how small or large
    Greed ruins our most honorable intentions
    with the thought of getting something out of it for yourself
    Greed only gets stronger the more you get

    But greed however evil has a good side too
    Greed inspires you to push yourself to the limit
    He pushes you to become better
    He inspires better social and economic outcomes

    If you get to know greed
    know his good side

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  3. Parker, I enjoyed how you used the form Nicole did, including the turn midway. I like Greed hiding, ruining our "honorable intentions." You make a good point that Greed might be a motivator--but watch for the dark side!

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  4. Hope

    Hope is a guardian angel
    Stretching their feathered wings to protect you
    From the stretching black tendrils
    Of despair

    Hope wraps their arms around you
    Hope keeps you safe through the tough times
    Hope is always there, waiting to protect you
    They know their place

    They know they cannot function without their counterpart, despair
    But no matter how mean and strong despair gets,
    Hope can protect you, save you
    Hope stands by your side no matter how hard things get

    Hope will not, can not abandon you

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  5. Addie, your contrast between hope and despair is powerful. The opening stanza with "feathered wings" and "stretching black tendrils" is both visual and tactile. I hadn't thought about hope "needing" despair, but you are right that "There is no quality in this world that is not what it is merely by contrast." (Herman Melville, Moby Dick)

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  6. Loneliness

    He doesn’t like confrontation
    Or being close at all
    He wants to be alone
    But feel a person's embrace

    He closes off from

    Everything

    Everyone

    To keep his space

    His best friends
    Are the tears
    That visit every night
    Only they don’t want to come

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