Good morning!
Today's mentor poem is by Jacqualine Woodson's poem "Firefly." Look how she captures summer by focusing on an insect!
It’s almost May
and yesterday
I saw a firefly.
You don’t see
them a lot
in the city.
Sometimes
in the park
in the near dark
one comes out
you’ll hear
a little kid shout
Lightning bug! Firefly!
It’s almost May
and yesterday
I caught a firefly in my hand.
First firefly I
seen in a
long, long time.
Make a wish,
Miss Edna said.
Make a good one.
Firefly wishes always come true.
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The forecast for Atlantic today is cloudy with a miserable April high of 45 degrees. Together, let's direct our focus to SUMMER and craft imagistic, sensory poems that make us SEE, SMELL, TASTE, HEAR and FEEL.
Think of a specific moment or image that you want to capture. Use crisp words. Pay attention to the sounds of words next to each other. Give us a hot slice of summer pie with a dollop of ice cream on top!
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Berryhill's Poem on the Deck
sparrow has transformed
the grill into her well-appointed
condo
wasp loops by
legs a-dangle,
then rests on my footstool
inches from my ankle
the glass at my elbow
is slippery cold
to my touch
breeze scatters
pistachio shells
across the deck
I turn the page
it is summer
all is well
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| Berryhill's summer view from her deck. |
Miss Lipp's poem uses the nonet form, which you already know:
Summertime meant I was stranded on six Iowa acres.
Landlocked between cornfields, I fantasized of town life.
In my youth, I resented being isolated
but now I see its use:
exploration without hesitation — looking for
hidden kittens in hay,
defending stick castles,
naming each
star
Happy writing!
AB
Thanks to Ethical ELA for many of the prompts I'm adapting for my students this month.